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Will Boucher's avatar

What a great story! I was certainly surprised with the ending; the story has so many pleasant twists and turns. I found myself empathizing with the ship for some reason, it reminds me of a faithful dog.

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

I came on the recommend of ol' Will Boucher and not sorry I did. A nice tight little story that packs a lot into a little. I especially like how the notion of pregnancy is hinted at throughout, in comments on wormholes being pregnant with possibilty, even in the nortion of the "PreG" era which suggests pregnant, though I don't know if that last one's intentional.

Any follow-up (again not sure if you're planning on one) could build on the idea of a galaxy being pregnant with a wormhole, it being pregnant with new galaxies, just as Rety's pregnant with unborn Bubun - and if you think about it, if Bunbun her unborn has ovaries they even contain pregnant possibilities too, all like a cosmic Russian doll.

So anyway, great writing, I'll be sure to check out your other pieces soon.

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