“He reserves his deep baritone for whispering sweet nothings or many nasty somethings in the throes of passion. He reserves it for rude contractors and sometimes even clients who try to micromanage him. “
I loved this! I can't decide on a favorite line, but I think it's between, "It is delicious how two complements become rhythm." and “How you gon call my grandma a bad bitch?” the former is so poetic, the latter made me laugh
NJ you don't disappoint. This was beautifully written.
I can't say there's a line I like more than the others because I enjoyed all of it. The conversation pulls me in. They don't make it a complicated conversation about a third, but confirm that eventhough they're still unsure, if its with each other they're ok.
Real lovers!! I really was on the fence about making a convo on children central to the story but then it dawned on me so little of erotic fiction ever has that included which is funny considering all the sex 🤣
True. I don't read as much erotica like I used to and from what I can recall, talking about children is barely mentioned. Unless the author mentions them in a negative way. Bad ass kids this and that, deadbeat baby daddy and ungrateful baby mama.
Your characters are real lovers for sure and we need more stories like this because they're real conversations.
I'm thinking of writing erotica and seeing your work inspires me.🤎✨
Yes! I wrote erotic poetry 20 years ago and I put it away because life was lifeing too hard for me back then. It's a genre that's been on my mind for a long time and now I'm ready to explore it again with poetry and microfics.
Oooooh la la.. I have my hand over my mouth blushing.
As you should 🤭
“he approaches the valley between my breasts.”
the visual is crazyyyy!
cut cut cut!!!
“He reserves his deep baritone for whispering sweet nothings or many nasty somethings in the throes of passion. He reserves it for rude contractors and sometimes even clients who try to micromanage him. “
beauty-FULL lines
I knew you couldn’t resist 😏
unfortunately 💔
I loved this! I can't decide on a favorite line, but I think it's between, "It is delicious how two complements become rhythm." and “How you gon call my grandma a bad bitch?” the former is so poetic, the latter made me laugh
Those are excellent choices! I approve. ++ thank you for reading
Not only poetic but energetic, more of this please ! 🥰
I will do my best!
My favorite part was the “I would” I liked how the conversation continued even after a long pause. So cute ♥️🥺
I thought so too and it was also a cute little door that he opened giving the power to say yes or no 🥹
Oh my, you should publish a book. I’d read it 🫣
From your lips to the universe’s ears!
Yes! This is what I needed today.
🖤🖤🖤🖤
NJ you don't disappoint. This was beautifully written.
I can't say there's a line I like more than the others because I enjoyed all of it. The conversation pulls me in. They don't make it a complicated conversation about a third, but confirm that eventhough they're still unsure, if its with each other they're ok.
Real lovers!! I really was on the fence about making a convo on children central to the story but then it dawned on me so little of erotic fiction ever has that included which is funny considering all the sex 🤣
True. I don't read as much erotica like I used to and from what I can recall, talking about children is barely mentioned. Unless the author mentions them in a negative way. Bad ass kids this and that, deadbeat baby daddy and ungrateful baby mama.
Your characters are real lovers for sure and we need more stories like this because they're real conversations.
I'm thinking of writing erotica and seeing your work inspires me.🤎✨
Yes omg please join me! We need more GOOD erotica by Black writers
Yes! I wrote erotic poetry 20 years ago and I put it away because life was lifeing too hard for me back then. It's a genre that's been on my mind for a long time and now I'm ready to explore it again with poetry and microfics.
I could use your help if you don't mind.
Down to assist and excited for what you create
Also, the first line had me blushing😊
Thanks NJ! 🤗💖
*fans self* You definitely had me in that scene with your characters. 😊
just want to say i hate you.
Bye!
😭😭😭😭😭
another reader bites the door? yes pls!
✌🏽
beautifully written and spicy af
Thank you Will! I always appreciate you reading my stuff
Your prose is beautiful. It has a musical lilt; like a poem. A great way to start my day. Thank you! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
As someone whose first love is poetry THANK YOU. Appreciate you starting your day with my writing 🖤