I was gone for a minute but now I’m back and instantly obsessed with your stories and the way you weave words. I loved this story and the protagonist who I read as hurt, processing, unhinged and chaotic. How did you even think to create this world?! 😭😭
Welcome back! Well it all started at 1am this morning when I was watching an episode of Smallville and thinking about the truth and a future where people only thought in terms of truths but how even that would be twisted and then it just wrote itself (with a little research on looms and weaving )
I got warm with pleasure too. Truth. I love the rhythm of your language in this piece. It was kinda like getting slapped around a little. Need to take a breather before i catch up on your archive
Thank you! I tried to make the pace match the mindset of the protagonist. So happy it landed well. Appreciate you reading (and hope you enjoy the archive when you make your way there.)
NJ, I think you're one of the best writers here; your flow is captivating.
My eyes opened so wide reading this 🥹 don’t make me weep!!
Hard agree
i love the contrast of the futuristic setting with the same heartbreaks and jealousies of any human era. fantastic.
Thank you so much. Humans will human
I loved the futuristic tone of this story and the details are incredible. Three chin hairs on a pre-menopausal woman. (!!!)
I wasn’t sure if it would be offensive or funny which means I had to use it! 😋 thanks for reading
It’s both that’s why it’s so fantastic!😂
This gave me chills. It's so beautifully written.
What can’t you write family. Future laureate pending.
From your lips to God’s ears!!!
I was gone for a minute but now I’m back and instantly obsessed with your stories and the way you weave words. I loved this story and the protagonist who I read as hurt, processing, unhinged and chaotic. How did you even think to create this world?! 😭😭
Welcome back! Well it all started at 1am this morning when I was watching an episode of Smallville and thinking about the truth and a future where people only thought in terms of truths but how even that would be twisted and then it just wrote itself (with a little research on looms and weaving )
I really love your writing and your mind. Bravo!
Thank you!!!
I got warm with pleasure too. Truth. I love the rhythm of your language in this piece. It was kinda like getting slapped around a little. Need to take a breather before i catch up on your archive
Thank you! I tried to make the pace match the mindset of the protagonist. So happy it landed well. Appreciate you reading (and hope you enjoy the archive when you make your way there.)