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Ashleigh Vaughn's avatar

*snap snap* yessss!! I loved how lyrical this felt reading. Like someone could easily take this and turn it into a song.

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NJ Fiction's avatar

That makes me happy. I almost structured it as a poem so it being a song would work so well

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Robert the contemplative's avatar

this is a beautiful piece!

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NJ Fiction's avatar

Thank you so much Robert 🖤🖤

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EJ Trask's avatar

that last paragraph is a killer. beautiful piece.

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NJ Fiction's avatar

Thank you! It was a late addition I’m glad it landed well

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