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Omg. I need more. 😫 sooo good!!! You inspired to write some horror fiction too. I've been kicking around an idea for a few years now, only recently wondering if it belongs on substack. You've opened the door and im gonna dance thru it. Thank you!!!

Also I'm gonna be glued for the next ones. I kinda liked the pathetic guy the most lol. I want to know what his history is!

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This response made me smile! I really do hope you write that story. Horror is a fun genre

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this was a ride. I'm curious to know Alive's fate

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Well, aren’t you Alive Will?! 🫵🏽

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oh shit…

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Very modern mythology 🤌🏽. I liked the way the women’s conversations seemed so real compared to the abstract nature they viewed Alive. I also like that I can be over thinking it and it’s just these three beating and kidnapping a man 😂

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🤣🤣🤣🤣 you get it. That’s part of why I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for giving it a read

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Yes! I always feel like I'm going on a ride and don't know where I'll end up when I read your stories NJ. Always like a movie. This one felt like a Jordan Peele movie, upsetting and funny at the same time.

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Bahahaha I love that description of reading my stories. Thank you Deirdre Jordan peele def has a quirky vibe and I will accept that comparison. Did you like the dialogue?

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Laughing at "I will accept that comparison." Yes especially when they are bickering or mean...My name is-- Irrelevant that's what.

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