I loved this little exchange. And I too can’t believe this is your first time writing about vampires. This felt so fresh but familiar. I kept imagining that Ennoui is who sis from the zombie story might have become in better circumstances. Also, I love how your post are sexy, and talk about sex, but always feel like a fun tease.
I like how becoming the vampire is the better circumstance to being a voodoo priestess 🤣🤣 it took way too long to get here (re writing vampire fiction but now that I’m here it’s time to cause trouble)
I had no clue vampires carry no scent. Is that true lore or something you created for the story? Either way it makes sense, no reflection, death in sunlight, they aren't human and their qualities show it. This was fun, I want to know more about Ennoui and Leo's adventures, both together and apart.
It depends on which vampire lore you follow. Like twilight vamps smell good as to tempt you but mostly vamps are apex predators so they tend to be scentless in most stories. I started writing a part two so maybe we’ll learn more about those two cuties 🫢
Very carnal and funny! you are great at highlighting the absurd and the extreme through your fiction - Id love to see more supernatural stories, as I rarely read that genre but loved this!
I thought it was delightful, hedonistic and wild. Would definitely like more, like it's a character sketch or intro (like a cold intro before the credits). Great erotic feeling, but more vamp action (not that, the other) on next outing would be a great thrill too.
Awaiting Ennoui’s origin story!!! Alsooo, Lisa! As a “professional” mixologist myself - the way you wrote about her blood-tails, inspired me to get back to experimenting at the home bar.
I feel like if I were a vampire I’d be into artisanal vampire bougie ass shit 😅 like get in babe let’s travel to Italy for blood that tastes like the finest olive oil and basil
Enjoyed this! I could read more and would love to see this on screen. Felt like a scene in Blade! I love reading your work because your characters all come from the same backgrounds we do. It’s a breath of fresh air to see fiction where the characters have fades, Haitian, etc. I can’t imagine the wtf story 😂
YESSSSS I'm so glad you decided to write a story about vampires! More, please. :)
" His eyes were a cold brown that I would’ve liked to see nestled between my thighs or looking up from knees begging for me."
WHEWWWWW. So many spicy lines that I loved but that one...yes.
I'm always so impressed by your world building! Getting so much detail into a short story is incredible.
Anyway, again, more vampire content please mèsi <3
Yay!! So glad you enjoyed it. I’ll do my best to write more vampire fiction
You stink of human despair,” I said.
“And you stink of loneliness,” he replied.
I loved this little exchange. And I too can’t believe this is your first time writing about vampires. This felt so fresh but familiar. I kept imagining that Ennoui is who sis from the zombie story might have become in better circumstances. Also, I love how your post are sexy, and talk about sex, but always feel like a fun tease.
I like how becoming the vampire is the better circumstance to being a voodoo priestess 🤣🤣 it took way too long to get here (re writing vampire fiction but now that I’m here it’s time to cause trouble)
Thank you as always for reading
You're really great at writing sex scenes. It's not easy! I would love to see more of this.
Tehehe 🫢 I think I’ll release some books under a pen name!
I had no clue vampires carry no scent. Is that true lore or something you created for the story? Either way it makes sense, no reflection, death in sunlight, they aren't human and their qualities show it. This was fun, I want to know more about Ennoui and Leo's adventures, both together and apart.
It depends on which vampire lore you follow. Like twilight vamps smell good as to tempt you but mostly vamps are apex predators so they tend to be scentless in most stories. I started writing a part two so maybe we’ll learn more about those two cuties 🫢
Ready!
Very carnal and funny! you are great at highlighting the absurd and the extreme through your fiction - Id love to see more supernatural stories, as I rarely read that genre but loved this!
Yay!! Thank you it’s definitely a fine line to walk but I enjoy seeing how far I could push it without losing my reader
I thought it was delightful, hedonistic and wild. Would definitely like more, like it's a character sketch or intro (like a cold intro before the credits). Great erotic feeling, but more vamp action (not that, the other) on next outing would be a great thrill too.
Taking mental notes on this one!
You know what the vamp fans crave - sex (check), exotic wildness (check), the good ol’ vein juice (unsatisfied as yet)
It’s me I’m the vamp fans 🧛🏽♀️😏 I know my people.
Awaiting Ennoui’s origin story!!! Alsooo, Lisa! As a “professional” mixologist myself - the way you wrote about her blood-tails, inspired me to get back to experimenting at the home bar.
Love that! This one was def inspired by a mango miso one I had two weeks ago! I hope you write about your experiments
pure artisanal vampire bougie-ass bliss
I feel like if I were a vampire I’d be into artisanal vampire bougie ass shit 😅 like get in babe let’s travel to Italy for blood that tastes like the finest olive oil and basil
I think this is what they would call on TikTok “spicy”!
I’m not on the clock app but I think you might be right 🥵
Enjoyed this! I could read more and would love to see this on screen. Felt like a scene in Blade! I love reading your work because your characters all come from the same backgrounds we do. It’s a breath of fresh air to see fiction where the characters have fades, Haitian, etc. I can’t imagine the wtf story 😂
Thank you Marc!! Imagine the swag of Haitian vampires. I just know they’d be cool as fuck 🙂↕️
Also did you like the club named blood 😭 I couldn’t help myself