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Will Boucher's avatar

I'm usually not a huge fantasy guy but this is great! I really love the mirthful relationship Osellia and Kasla strike up. Yes, to answer your question, for some reason I do trust Osellia.

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NJ Fiction's avatar

I’m actually surprised you’re not a fantasy guy but now that I think about it that makes sense. Osellia def has good vibes I want to explore her character and see where it goes. Thanks for reading

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alex b.'s avatar

I love it!!!💚

I wonder what that situation would've been if Kasla and Osellia didn't meet. Osellia probably would still be running, captured again or dead. I like that Kasla took the time to listen to her and recognizes that she needs someone to guide her in understanding who she is and how to manage her powers.

If I had a dragon (and I do like dragons 🤭) it would be blue.

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NJ Fiction's avatar

I loved that you were reading this at 4am 😂😂

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alex b.'s avatar

At this hour if I'm not painting then I'm reading.😊

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NJ Fiction's avatar

I think Osellia has power so I don’t think she’d be dead 👀 her power got rid of her shackles anyway so I imagine it’d take care of those slavers. Do you think Kaela should’ve killed them? I debated for a while about that one.

Blue is a good color! Like SAPHIRA blue? I think mine might be green or a dark red.

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alex b.'s avatar

She has powers but how confident is she using them? I envision her as being a young witch that's still learning how to use them.

As for Kasla killing the slavers, I wondered if that was to follow before she and Osellia left...or maybe roughed them up a bit. But slowing them down? Hmmm if their reputation is capturing and torturing then death is necessary.

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NJ Fiction's avatar

Hahaha I love the death is necessary quote!

As for Osellia she can’t use them but they won’t let her die at least not yet hehehe I won’t say more I might write a part 2

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alex b.'s avatar

I'll be patiently waiting🤗

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Marc Typo's avatar

I say this again. I love that all of your characters got melanin. I could see this as a pilot. Good stuff.

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NJ Fiction's avatar

Always and imma make it known! Also I’m def considering a part 2. They’re too good of characters for just this one off

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