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Jonathan Byrd's avatar

I love the way the narrator lovingly objectifies and centers herself. It feels honest to the animal desire.

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Jessica W's avatar

Oh! This is so good! I love the attention to detail: the curve of muscle while wearing heels, the warm scent of his body, the small talk, the 2 lovers united as one. Your writing strikes a chord in me every time; often I read your pieces twice to admire the gift of your craft. When I can feel the author’s words hit a nerve or quicken my heartbeat, that’s the style of writing that makes me love to read. The joy, pleasure, and love in this story feels palatable. You’ve knocked it outta the park, again!

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