Superb - you've integrated the sensual feel of a life with a wonderful symbol for life's push through the ocean of being. Simple and complex at the same time.
Favourite line or phrase? Probably quote a note or two on that score...
Edit - Just looking at it again, it's remarkable how short it is. I could have sworn it was twice as long. Dense with texture and meaning.
When I was editing it the final time and finally checked the word count I was floored!! It doesn’t feel short at all which is an accomplishment for a flash fiction.
This one made me hungry and question the nature of my existence at the same time. It's a lovely experience reading your works
That means a ton to me and I feel the same way about your writing!!
Beautiful writing.
🖤 thank you Deirdre
Superb - you've integrated the sensual feel of a life with a wonderful symbol for life's push through the ocean of being. Simple and complex at the same time.
Favourite line or phrase? Probably quote a note or two on that score...
Edit - Just looking at it again, it's remarkable how short it is. I could have sworn it was twice as long. Dense with texture and meaning.
When I was editing it the final time and finally checked the word count I was floored!! It doesn’t feel short at all which is an accomplishment for a flash fiction.