nice work. the death of memory would be like a leprosy of the mind. makes you imagine what your own day to day would go like if the fog crept in.... sinister.😎
"She could not recall forgetting to recall that she had a bed" - A great line which recreates the vortex of forgetting and all its repercussions and rippling unremembrances.
Really enjoyed how you pushed the story forward through interesting visuals: trash piling up around the city, pets scratching at the doors, etc. Great story!
Vieux — such a subtle thing to use the French word for “old.” Memory of everything (not remembering what to do during a fire was my favorite) being not-so-slowly eaten is a really great premise. Expertly constructed and torn apart. So great!
Poor Lee. I thought no he had it the worse. But at least his windows were down… excuse me while I go do some brain exercises to keep my neurons firing!
I loved this. Thank you for sharing it. Memory is life. Beautiful.
Thanks for reading Hanna
A nicely crafted downward spiral into oblivion. Well done, NJ. I really enjoyed this.
Thank you Shane I’m glad you took the time to read it
nice work. the death of memory would be like a leprosy of the mind. makes you imagine what your own day to day would go like if the fog crept in.... sinister.😎
It’s terrifying stuff. Thank you for reading Nick
trying to read all of them... honestly the quality, the standard, is incredible. whole lot should be gathered and printed
I agree! I’ve been working my way through them too and I’d love to have them bound
"She could not recall forgetting to recall that she had a bed" - A great line which recreates the vortex of forgetting and all its repercussions and rippling unremembrances.
Nice tight story, very enjoyable indeed.
Thank you A.P!
Really enjoyed how you pushed the story forward through interesting visuals: trash piling up around the city, pets scratching at the doors, etc. Great story!
Thanks so much for reading William, I’m looking forward to digging into your story soon.
Vieux — such a subtle thing to use the French word for “old.” Memory of everything (not remembering what to do during a fire was my favorite) being not-so-slowly eaten is a really great premise. Expertly constructed and torn apart. So great!
Thank you so much and I’m glad you picked up on the Vieux. Appreciate you reading and congrats on bringing the whole event to life.
Poor Lee. I thought no he had it the worse. But at least his windows were down… excuse me while I go do some brain exercises to keep my neurons firing!
Bahahaha 🤣🤣 thank you for reading
Ingenious! --how the story kinda forgets itself with each day but keeps pushing on- great telling.
Thank you so much!!
Wow, fantastic
Thank you so much for reading Keith
loved the concept and how it's formatted as a diary. "we must keep the fog out by any means necessary" is my mantra for the day
Doing brain exercises all day 🤣
wow this was deeply unsettling. all the little vignettes you described were so real. well done.
Thank you EJ appreciate you reading as always 🖤
Dang. Up until everyone died I was thinking I wouldn't mind a hit of that fog. Nice!
😭😭😭😭 why are you so funny?!